Shihotori's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ziondiac (feat. SystemGlitch) - Erin]

lovely track

Ziondiac responds:

Thanks

[Change Your Mind]

A pretty good track. I like the vibe. The drop hits hard and it sounds really exciting. Mix-wise, it's a little muddy. You got too much low end, it kinda overwhelms the drums as well. The bass sound design is also pretty simple, mostly sub-bass, I suggest adding some mid-layers so it adds texture to the bass.

[huma x BAYL44 x Yuzume - Its been so long]

I like this, it's interesting and unique. There's a sense of, what I like to call, "kawaii music" but it's energetic and fast and fun. Also, each part by the 3 artists blends well with each other even though all 3 are essentially making different music. It's also nice to see you, specifically, trying out something new.
I hope you make more unique and interesting music, looking forward to it!
Also Over Heaven collab when... 8)

zPetrichor responds:

Thanks for the kind words! Specifically my part speaking, I had this idea of making something sorta like "M3 Doujin Hardcore style" for a while, I've been listening to A LOT of M3 music recently so it's damn nice to pull off something similar :P This seemed like the perfect opportunity to test those ideas out and I'm so so glad it worked out! I will definitely make more music like this in the future cuz I've been enjoying my music alot ;)

[HYSTERIA]

Long await, had fun working with you.

[To Be Well]

Hey, I like this. The composition, the mix, the vocal, everything feels just right. Although I'm more into modern Metal, stuff like this still catches my attention. I hope you will get into the next round.
Oh yeah you shouldn't feel weird cuz my submission is also metal. :D

dude2312 responds:

Fellow instrument player,

Thanks for your feedback, my man! I wish there were more people who play instruments here. Not complaining! But I do listen to more rock, metal, grunge. Etc than any other genre.

[Brurger Slirngerg]

I think this is cool, you only show the first few seconds so it's not giving me the full picture of the song but still it's cool. So instead of talking about the composition, I'll talk about the mix cuz I think it's necessary to point out:
Now I know every artist, every engineer have different way to approach mixing when they know what they're doing, but I still think that the guitar is not "brutal" enough, I don't know if you have double tracked it or not so I will suggest you to double track your rhythm guitar, you know, 2 rhythm panned hard left and right or so. They sound really good tbh. And the drum, it kinda feels boring, it's missing the high. The kick sounds dull. You haven't mastered this track yet so for now it's like this but when you do master it, it will probably sound different. Now this could be just your taste, your style so just my suggestion and personal opinion on it. Nonetheless, the demo is fine, I will say fine and not great because this demo is too short for me to feel anything out of it. But I'm looking forward to the full track.

[AltairGalaxy - Mad Detective]

Just a quick note on volume, please use a Limiter on the Master Channel to prevent clipping cuz it'll sound pretty bad if there's clipping.

AltairGalaxy responds:

hmmmmmmmm, i still have so many to learn because i only have half a clue what you are saying, but thank you so much for giving me feedbacks as always!

[~EnV~Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix)]

Its 10 years birthday is coming soon, this song is classic. :3

[AltairGalaxy - Beyond Universe]

Good but still need to improve in Mastering and Mixing.
Also EQ the drums cuz they sound pretty... rough :v

AltairGalaxy responds:

Thanks for your feedback :D

[Moongrains Arrangement 2.0]

Cool but the genre is not Electronic House as far as i'm concern :thinking: